It is important to ensure that children with a wide range of abilities and from a variety of social backgrounds mix with each other at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Its generally believed by many people in general and parents in specific that
children
with a wide range of abilities and from a variety of social background
will affect negatively on Fix the agreement mistake
backgrounds
child
. But, from my perspective, Add an article
the child
a child
this
idea is misunderstood by many, this
is why many experts from teachers and children
behavior
Change the spelling
behaviour
specialist
came out and support the idea of diversity in schools.
Fix the agreement mistake
specialists
Firstly
, having this
mix in same
class will aware Add an article
the same
children
to be more open to accept
each other no matter what the level difference. Change the verb form
accepting
For example
, smart people will be a support system for other Correct your spelling
child
child's
childs
by keeping their friends motivated and trying to be much better and be all equivalent and work as a team. Correct your spelling
children
Additionally
, this
diverse
if Replace the word
diversity
its
completed by Replace the word
it's
it is
teachers
awareness will reflect beneficially on Change noun form
teachers'
teacher's
kids
to tolerate and accept each other.
Secondly
, a wide range of talents will raise the competition between kids
and some take it too serious
and got hurt by not being number one in class. Some Change the adjective
seriously
kids
are jealous this
will put them under pressure which is not good. Moreover
, in this
case, parents can play important role in supporting their children
no matter what the result is and push them to love themselves and accept the competition by taking it as a game to prove the best every time in a good way.
To conclude, it is a must to have this
diversity in schools to arise a level of respect and tolerance and avoid bullying between children
. So absolutely, I disagree that this
mix will affect negatively on kids
, in contrast
making separation will grow a generation that is
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