Many people feel that media coverage has becoming increasingly biased today. Why is this? What can be done to fix this problem?

It is believed that
media
is the fourth pillar of the country.
Therefore
, it is extremely important
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people
with quality content. It is agreed that organs of public opinion become more biased nowadays.
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reasons and ways of solving
of
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this
issue. Many
people
claim that various broadcasts become more focused on increasing the TRP and giving false rumours .
Furthermore
,under the pressure from powerful corporate owners, they may occasionally conceal a valuable or crucial message. Aside from that, they don't give the
people
full
news
and messages.
For instance
, India created a
law
pertaining to farmers. In fact, the
law
was against the farmer but the
news
said that the
law
was in favour of the farmer.
Additionally
,
the
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television has covered
up
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the
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story of farmer demonstrations
as a result
of pressure from some businessmen. So it is a good example of information quality
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provided
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by mass
media
to
public
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the public
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.
However
, there are some possible solutions to eliminate
this
issue. The most powerful adjustments can be done by
government
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the government
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. The authority can adopt specific laws which could forbid
news
that gives false information. In case of violation of the
law
, the channels must be blocked, the owners must pay a fine, or other forms of punishment must be applied.
Also
, a lot of technology is used by humans nowadays , including the
internet
.
Subsequently
, the
Internet
also
might be a powerful tool in
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the fight
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against low-quality mass
media
. So,
community
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can be fully aware of fake announcements through the use of the
internet
.
Additionally
,
people
can send
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for relevant laws through the
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,
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will help officials to be
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of
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. To summarise, some corporate owners started to pollute the
media
space and some channels become concentrated only on TRP.
Therefore
,
people
become felt that mass
media
provides
news
in
favour
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of them ,but not for
community
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the community
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. But it can be solved by
government
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, they should take some serious
step
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to stop
this
. And of course by
people
, who can notify officials in time . After
thorough
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this
subject, it is predicted that these issues can be solved easily just by some smart decisions.
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