You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your local bookshop has invited members of the public to recommend a guest speaker for an upcoming event that will include a series of talks from well-known people. Write leter to the bookshop. In your letter • suggest a speaker • say what they would contribute to the event • explain why other people would be interested too

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with reference to a newspaper advertisement to recommend a guest speaker for the monthly event planned at your bookshop. I believe we should invite Mr Harry Kane, the economist. He has performed various consulting roles in developing countries in the past decade to manage the economic recession. Our country is struggling to meet the basic needs of people and it may take years to recover from the current situation. Mr Kane could guide us on how to handle finances and run the family when the inflation rate is skyrocketing.

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, these issues are faced by people living in the vicinity. Many people would be benefited from

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speech as it may help them to move forward during the difficult time period. If you require more details on

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speech, we could meet and discuss it in person. Look forward to hearing your responses soon. Yours faithfully, Kyle Walker

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The Greeting

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Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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8 paragraphs

155 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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The Greeting

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