Some people think that the media have the right to publish details of people’s private lives, while others think it should be controlled. Discuss both views.
Nowadays, privacy is one of the major concerns of everyone. It is believed that media, especially
newspapers
, have to freedom to publish news
of
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about
people
’s personal life
. However
, others argue that publication
of some Correct article usage
the publication
news
should be controlled. In this
essay, I will explain both points of view and express an opinion at the end.
To begin
with, newspapers
play a vital role to make people
aware about
what is happening around the world. Mostly, celebrities and political figures want to be famous world Change preposition
of
widely
. So, they can allow the Replace the word
wide
newspapers
to write articles about them
routines and Change the pronoun
their
life’s
in order to produce more interest for the rest of the Unnecessary verb
life
people
. In addition
, newspapers
mainly focus on the
actors, singers, influencers, Correct article usage
apply
models
, and it talks more about private Correct word choice
and models
life
than the
professional Correct article usage
apply
life
. This
is because many citizens, especially the
young Correct article usage
apply
people
has
taken them as Change the verb form
have
a
role model. Correct article usage
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Moreover
, they have the curiosity to know more about their favourite stars. For instance
, a lot of them they
win money by letting their lives be published in the media.
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apply
On the other hand
, some people
think that the
reporters should be restricted to publish Correct article usage
apply
news
of individual private moments because every person can enjoy their happiness. The
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News
news
publishers should make news
about the current situation of a country rather than interfering others
events. Following Change preposition
in others
this
, the
details publications about famous Correct article usage
apply
people
could create negative images on their reputations such
as discover
a boyfriend or girlfriend, marriage events and Wrong verb form
discovering
other type
of situations. But, sometimes Change the wording
another type
other types
this
famous Change the determiner
these
people
want to show their lives and they want money to show it.
In conclusion, I completely understand if some famous people
want to sell their life
and win money with this
. But if they don’t want that their life’s
will publish Change the noun form
lives
life
in
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on
the
social media, the reporters and the Correct article usage
apply
news
publish notices about them.Submitted by maiterechegr on
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