Nowadays more and more people have to compete with young people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? What are some possible solutions?
There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of elderly
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people
inability to apply for the same jobs as Change noun form
people's
younger
generation. In Add an article
the younger
this
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essay
I am going to present the possible outcomes of Add a comma
essay,
this
issue and their effect and give possible suggestions to fix Linking Words
this
problem. One of the first things we need to take into consideration is that Linking Words
majority
of students nowadays are highly knowledgeable in technology, Correct article usage
the majority
what
makes it easier for them to apply for a job. Aged Correct pronoun usage
which
people
, who don’t have much experience in working with technology are left behind, Use synonyms
as a result
, many Linking Words
people
are getting jobless and have to barely make ends meet. Use synonyms
For example
, I have heard from my Linking Words
parents
friend, who is a teacher, that insufficient knowledge Change to a genitive case
parent's
parents'
in
computers had it’s real consequences during the years of Change preposition
of
pandemic
, as technologies Add an article
the pandemic
where
used every day and Correct your spelling
were
people
in their Use synonyms
50
had a hard time trying to learn new skills. Correct your spelling
50s
Although
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,
the situation is global, there are still some solutions government could take to prevent it. Supporting elderly Remove the comma
apply
people
financially would help them to find better living conditions and to pay for some extra lessons to improve their knowledge. Use synonyms
Also
, Linking Words
helping
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it helps
people
to learn new skills by giving them acceptable information resources and Use synonyms
technics
. For instance, during Correct your spelling
techniques
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the pandemic
pandemic
many schools have given teachers equipment so they didn't have to buy everything on their own and have Add a comma
pandemic,
done
free lessons for teachers on how to use the computer as well. Verb problem
provided
To conclude
, I consider that quickly learning young Linking Words
people
may take over others, which may cause an increased poverty in the society. In order to solve the problem, Use synonyms
government
needs to take action Correct article usage
the government
such
as financial assistance and accessible information.Linking Words
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion