Newspapers have a significant influence on people’s ideas and opinions. Why is this happening? is it a positive or negative situation?

Nowadays, it has been noticed that the impact of
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press is more influential
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the thinking process of every individual’s attitude. Reading newspaper
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for those who
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to
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within their circle. In my opinion, there
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positive
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impact
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of reading
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comparatively to negative.
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effect of Printing media is it mostly publishes
an authentic news
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. Readers’ are having a firm believe
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it and they store it in their memory to
further
spread it. The reason is early ages when
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wasn’t invented
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, there was an authentic source of newspaper that helped to enlighten
people
regarding the current situation of that era, which ultimately led
people
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proactively.
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, in 1947, during the partition of Indo –Pak the newspapers were the only source on which
people
believed and took preventive measures
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before the chaos happened.
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, Tabloids
also
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people
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the ongoing situation of the economy.
Secondly
, it covers certain domains
such
as jobs sports, business, commerce and trade, politics,
entertainment
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, which notifies the unemployed community easier to search for
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job options’.
For instance
, during the Covid
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several
people
lost their jobs and there was printed media helped
people
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the current job openings.
Therefore
, Broadsheets provides
a wholesome information
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about the current situation. In conclusion, newspapers have had positive effects on
people
's judgement and belief and at the same time, it has created job opportunities and enlightened the public.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • influence
  • opinions
  • perspectives
  • crucial
  • informing
  • educating
  • biased
  • sensationalized
  • shape
  • attitudes
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