Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Sharing
information
is an actual issue in our world where it has a strong influence on people
. There are various spheres of our life where information
is more or less important for people
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this
. For this
reason, some people
consider that it is good to share
information
while others think in the opposite way .
For example
, practically all scientists are glad to share
information
with ordinary people
or other scientists. There is no competition in this
sphere . Sometimes it is bad for government
when scientists Add an article
the government
share
secret information
with international spies but it will not hurt information
.
There are some simple rules in academic
world which Add an article
the academic
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limits
limite
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people
. If person
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a person
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then
the person gives you all information
what
he knows for free . Correct word choice
that
On the other hand
, if the person knows much and he knows that you can not give him actual or new information
then
he will share
information
with you just for money . For example
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a student
student
pay for Fix the agreement mistake
students
his
learning while two students can cooperate and Correct pronoun usage
their
share
information
with each other . It is obviously
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information
in business
world can Add an article
the business
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be followes
followes
by releases . There is large competition and it may Correct your spelling
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takes
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much
costs for companies . Companies Change the quantifier
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lose
loose
their profit every day because Correct your spelling
lose
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someone
some one
can not keep Correct your spelling
someone
silence
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silent
especially
IT companies .
To sum up all the above, it is necessary to say that there are some spheres in which Add the comma(s)
,especially
information
is a crime . In my opinion , in many cases ,information
can be too sharing important or shared at all .Submitted by elyas271 on
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