Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Sharing
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is an actual issue in our world where it has a strong influence on
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. There are various spheres of our life where
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is more or less important for
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. For
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reason, some
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consider that it is good to
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information
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while others think in the opposite way .
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, practically all scientists are glad to
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information
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with ordinary
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or other scientists. There is no competition in
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sphere . Sometimes it is bad for
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when scientists
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secret
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with international spies but it will not hurt
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. There are some simple rules in
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world which
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limits
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limit
informational sources between
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with you and you are ready to keep talking
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the person gives you all
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he knows for free .
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, if the person knows much and he knows that you can not give him actual or new
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he will
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information
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with you just for money .
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student
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pay for
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learning while two students can cooperate and
share
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information
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with each other . It is
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that sharing
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in
business
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the business
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world can
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followed
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followes
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followed
by releases . There is large competition and it may
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much
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costs for companies . Companies
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loose
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lose
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their profit every day because
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someone
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some one
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someone
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can not keep
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especially
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IT companies . To sum up all the above, it is necessary to say that there are some spheres in which
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is a crime . In my opinion , in many cases ,
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can be too sharing important or shared at all .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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