You are not happy with the course you are doing at the college and would like to change to a different course. Write a letter to the college director requesting to change your course. You should include details about: • What course are you doing now? • Why you are not satisfied with that course? • What course would you like to change?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

Dear MR. Sami , I am Muna Ali a student in the IT software program , I am writing to request your assistance to change my

course

Use synonyms

to the advanced

technology

Use synonyms

program at your college . I joined the IT software

course

Use synonyms

1 month after I read about it and its benefits for those who have a

technology

Use synonyms

degree like me.

As a result

Linking Words

, I applied for it and paid for the full 6 months' duration , its fees were 2000 $ .

However

Linking Words

; for a month I did not feel that

this

Linking Words

course

Use synonyms

's content will help me or elevate my experience . Sir , I have planned to register for Harvard university for a master's degree and one of their requirements is a full

course

Use synonyms

about recent

technology

Use synonyms

software.

Hence

Linking Words

, my current

course

Use synonyms

would not give me that requirement , and I am not satisfied to complete it . I would be grateful if you could assist me to enter the advanced

technology

Use synonyms

. not only it has the same fees as my current

course

Use synonyms

, but

also

Linking Words

it is more developed and has what actually I require IN ORDER TO OBTAIN MORE knowledge and experience . looking forward to your response . sincerely , Muna Ali

Submitted by munaagha89 on Mon Nov 14 2022

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

211 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6.5
band
In many counties, more and more people are staying at home to look after their children when women work full time. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, in many countries and some cultures, working outside the house is a tabu for women and they believe mothers should only take care of children and the household. Most of these beliefs came from developing countries and third-world nations. However, it is totally usual for a woman to work in developed countries.
4
band
Some people think the only purpose of prison is to punish crime. Others think it has other functions. Discuss the two views and give your opinion.
Some people believe that crime rate will be diminished by sending criminals to prison while others say that there are other functions to reduce this. This essay discusses both viewpoints and I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons.
4.5
band
The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what are the possible solutions?
This is a truth that sending messages by internet is the most effective way,defenitely it's shared and consumed. However,some issues may caused by using internet to transform information.This essay will discuss few most serve issues due to improper way of using the internet and provide some suggestions to solve the problems.
6
band
Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre explain why the sports and leisure centres is importsnt for the local community describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes
l am writing about your decision for closing the sports and leisure centre in our neighborhood in west of star street.
5.5
band
A person's worth nowadays seems to judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned value, such as honour, kindness, and trust no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that materialistic things and financial status are crucial in society. Some of them argue and suppose every person should be judged by their originality and values. In this essay, I will give my opinion and express my perspective.

In many counties, more and more people are staying at home to look after their children when women work full time. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?

Some people think the only purpose of prison is to punish crime. Others think it has other functions. Discuss the two views and give your opinion.

The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what are the possible solutions?

A person's worth nowadays seems to judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned value, such as honour, kindness, and trust no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?