You are not happy with the course you are doing at the college and would like to change to a different course. Write a letter to the college director requesting to change your course. You should include details about: • What course are you doing now? • Why you are not satisfied with that course? • What course would you like to change?

#course #college #change #director

Dear MR. Sami , I am Muna Ali a student in the IT software program , I am writing to request your assistance to change my

course

to the advanced

technology

program at your college . I joined the IT software

course

1 month after I read about it and its benefits for those who have a

technology

degree like me.

As a result

, I applied for it and paid for the full 6 months' duration , its fees were 2000 $ .

However

; for a month I did not feel that

this

course

's content will help me or elevate my experience . Sir , I have planned to register for Harvard university for a master's degree and one of their requirements is a full

course

about recent

technology

software.

Hence

, my current

course

would not give me that requirement , and I am not satisfied to complete it . I would be grateful if you could assist me to enter the advanced

technology

. not only it has the same fees as my current

course

, but

also

it is more developed and has what actually I require IN ORDER TO OBTAIN MORE knowledge and experience . looking forward to your response . sincerely , Muna Ali

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