The 21st century has begun. What changes do you think this new century will bring? Use examples and details in your answer.

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With the development of the new century, so many inventions have been designed with high technologies, computer science and so on can modern the world in the fastest way that we have

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seen before.

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may cause some changes in our daily life and in the near future.

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of all, due to people’s demand in society, more and more discoveries appear by scientists, physicians, companies with

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ambition to change the world and governments of many large countries.

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, we are expected to have up-to-date and additional devices, tools and technologies for the

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such

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as spaceships to visit

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, robots that can help us arrange everything in our dwelling and a kind of gas we can breathe in. I do believe that we will have more and more equipment to survive in any harsh condition without help from others or lack of rescue.

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, what we actually have in the 21st century that

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changed

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life the most is

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, recently, people have had a lot of opportunities to meet their family from

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distance through video calls, more convenient to make international friends and follow the news from other countries. Through the covid 19 pandemic, I

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predicted, there will be

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considerable progress in biology where new and

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vaccines will be produced in the

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20 years that are necessary for our health. All in all, we have just been through

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of the century yet so many inventions have been created to fashion the world and brought a lot of advantages.

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, I am sure that

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to the development of technologies and people’s

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in their life, millions of contrives will be invented soon and bring more benefits

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

291 words

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The 21st century has begun. What changes do you think this new century will bring? Use examples and details in your answer.

Fully explain your ideas

Some people argue that job satisfaction is more important than a high salary. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the given statement?

Question -Your manager has asked you to arrange a party for a colleague leaving the company. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter suggest a suitable date and time for the party recommend a venue propose the food and entertainment options that should be available

parents are putting a lot of pressure on their children to succeed. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think that the main purpose of schools is to turn children into good citizens and workers, rather to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some feel that cities should be designed to be beautiful while others feel their functionality is more important. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.