You recently stayed at your friend’s place, to look after the house while he/she is away. You accidentally damaged something in his/her house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: describe what the accident was explain when it happened suggest how the damage can be fixed.

Dear Ali, I hope you are in good health and spirits. I am writing
this
letter to apologize for an unfortunate accident
occurred
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at your house.
To begin
with, as you know,
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your request I spent
last
weekend at your place to
took
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care of your home while you were not in the city. Actually, on the
first
day of my stay when I was cooking
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lunch for myself, a crystal dish which was in the
first
top left cabinet of your kitchen fell down from my hand and broke into small pieces. I was searching for a microwave safe bowl and in that
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I hold the dish to see
what's
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underneath it but all of a sudden it crumbled from my hand. I assembled all of its particles and
thrown
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it
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in the garbage bin and wiped
off
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the floor.
Consequently
, I am very embarrassed and guilty for what I have done but I assure you that I will go to the market whenever I get
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and I will buy the same utensil for you or I can pay you the amount of money it cost you to bear your loss. It's up to you
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what ever
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you want you can inform me. I am waiting for your reply. Yours sincerely,
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