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Machine translation (MT) is slower and less accurate than human translation and there is no immediate or predictable likelihood of machines taking over this role from humans

It is true that there have been great advances in technology over the
last
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 forty years.
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 the use of mobile phones and e-mail communication is common these days.
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,
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 that translate from one
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 to another are still in their early stages. It seems to me that a
machine
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 could never do as good a job as a human, especially when it comes to interpreting what people are saying. Of course, machines can translate statements
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 as “Where is the bank?” but even simple statements are not always straightforward because the meaning depends on more than just words.
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 the word “bank” has a number of different meanings in English. How does a translating
machine
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 know which meaning to take?  In order to understand what people are saying, you need to take into account the relationship between the speakers and their situation. A
machine
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 cannot tell the difference between the English expression “Look out!” meaning “Be careful!” and “Look out!” meaning “Put your head out of the window”. You need a human being to interpret the situation.
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, with written
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, it is difficult for a
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 to know how to translate accurately because we rarely translate every word.
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, we try to take into consideration how the idea would be expressed in the other
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.
This
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 is hard to do because every
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 has its own way of doing and saying things. For these
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 I feel that it is most unlikely that machines will take the place of humans in the field of translating and interpreting. If machines ever learn to think, perhaps
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 they will be in a position to take on

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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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