An English-speaking friend has written to you to ask you how your studies are going. Write a letter to the friend: tell your friend how you are preparing for the exam. tell him/her how you feel about it. tell him your expectations.

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Dear Javid, It is kind of you to ask me about my studies that how I prepare and do my tasks. I would like to let you know that I have been piled too much work recently.

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,I put all of my efforts in order to achieve a high score,so I spend a minimum of 6 hours a day on all subjects like maths,geography and so on.

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is the period that I feel terrible about because I am unable to allocate time in order to meet my friends' invitations.

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,I hardly find time to sleep sufficiently because of my exam preparation.

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affects my mood negatively. I firmly believe that I will pass the exam with flying colours because working hard has improved my knowledge significantly

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I am more confident now compared to before.I expect to hit at least a 7 score because it is my primary target. I am looking forward to catching up with you soon. Sincerely Malik Maliki.

Submitted by malikli.malik1995 on Tue Nov 15 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

161 words

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