You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any address

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Dear Mr Smith, Hope my letter finds you in a good health. My name is Mohamed Ammar and I am the new tenant of the house in front of yours. Unfortunately, I did not get a chance yet to meet you and your family to introduce myself in person to you.

However

, I am writing to inform you that I arranged a welcoming party for my friends and relatives

Friday, at 4 pm.

This

is to introduce them to my new accommodation and neighbourhood. I am afraid that I might need to do some meat grilling in the front yard of the house.

In addition

to that, I expect that my friend would like to enjoy listening to music and talking loudly during the feast. I am worried that

this

might disturb you for an hour or two but I wish that you understand my position. I would

also

take

this

chance to invite you to join us anytime you wish during the party to know each other better and to spend a nice and joyful time together. Looking forward to seeing you

Friday at 4pm. Faithfully yours, Mohamed

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

191 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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