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These days, it is pervasive to have people from two different generations mix in ‎the same workplace. Are there more advantages or disadvantages to this ‎situation? Give your own opinion and include relevant examples.‎

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Well, it is common to see that youngsters,
adults
 and
elders
work
 together in all fields or businesses. I believe that
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however
,
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 are far more than
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 of
this
 trend. Which
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 the advancement of my knowledge, along with a specific conclusion. To commence with
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 of
this
 essay, the
first
 and foremost is that it is beneficial for juveniles and
adults
 because they can get experience from their seniors or
elders
, who have great experience of their life according to their age. To be precise, they have strategies
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for how
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 to strike balance between
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 and expenditures of
business
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the business
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.
For instance
, in
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the past
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time
,
elders
 used to run their
business
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businesses
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 on small
exhequer
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exchequer
 and they easily handle their losses and profits.
Hence
, if they all
work
 together they can learn many things
such
 as how to deal with clients, consumers, money
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management
mangement
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management
 and how to
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achieve
acheive
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achieve
work
 goals on
time
. Along with
this
, employees can get
work
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 from their
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colleagues
collegues
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colleagues
on
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in
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 their workplace. To elaborate, when they
work
 together they share their innovative ideas. As all people have
differernt
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different
 opinions on a particular topic, menace which they have to face on their
work
.
Thus
, they share their thoughts and get
acquianted
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acquainted
 with new
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techiques
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techniques
.
Additionally
, when they
work
 together, all workers do
team
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teamwork
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work
 and meetings which assist
for
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 making better
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relations
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 with their teammates and that
time
 no matter of age.
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Therefore
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Therefore
, it
also
 helps to overcome the problem of
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the generation
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 gap and they make strong bonds which displayed
unity
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the unity
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 of generations at their workplace. There are some
destructives
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destructive
destructiveness
 of
this
 statement is that if different generations
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pursue
persue
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pursue
work
 together sometimes they have to face difficulty in making decisions because
adults
 think by their own perspective and
elders
 use their traditional methods that
time
 decisions are delayed as any organization gain profit when their team
work
 together. Apart from
this
, as in these
days
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adults
 depend on technical gadgets to do calculations,
making
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 files and
orgainsing
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organising
organizing
 data
some
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apply
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times
elders
 find it
is
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difficult and
adults
 think
elders
 waste their
time
 because they use old strategies. In conclusion,
although
their
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 are
few
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a few
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 drawbacks of mixing age employees at
same
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the same
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work
,
nevertheless
,
benefits
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the benefits
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are outstrip
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 the disadvantages in terms of getting experience,
work
exposer
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exposure
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 and learning new strategies.
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