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Your local bookshop has invited members of the public to recommend a guest speaker for an upcoming event that will include a series of talks from well-known people. Write an e-mail to the bookshop. In your e-mail: • suggest a speaker • say what they would contribute to the event • explain why other people would be interested too

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
 letter to inform you about an amazing speaker whom I recently met and thought of recommending for the forthcoming event that you are conducting. So, the speaker is Ghazal Alagh, CEO of a very popular Brand, Mama’s Earth. My company had invited her to share her success story on Women’s Day.
Also
, she is a famous household name and most people buy products manufactured by her company.
Moreover
, she is an articulated speaker and her share of struggles is less known to a larger public when I heard it for the
first
 time, I was completely stunned. I am quite sure, if she would be invited to the event, there would be massive public to attend the affair. Most importantly, people would be interested in knowing how she left her high-paying job and started her own chain of business and achieved success in a shorter time. She was
also
 one of the jury members of the Shark Tank show and people would love to know some strategies for start-ups. I hope my recommendation suits what you are looking for. Yours Sincerely Bhawna Ahuja
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