Some people believe that it is good to share as such information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Despite it being thought that
information
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is the main key to many
business
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and scientific research and the academic world
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, there are some controversies about its freedom.
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, I agree with those who feel valuable data ought to be protected, while others believe it should be available for free. On the one hand, those who support to freedom of
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say that data could make balance
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socio-economic life. If fertiliser manufacturing companies disclose their
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recipes
recipies
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recipes
to all,
people
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would be
benifited
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benefited
worldwide.
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, a recent study has shown that most
of
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the
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third
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-world countries have to import fertilisers for peasants, and their food harvesting costs increasing high day by day
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the
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importing.
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, their expenditure could be convenient if they produce fertiliser by knowing
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method of production.
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, many believe that government should publish
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information
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about which industries are spoiling nature severely
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carbon emissions. When
people
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will be informed about their activities, they will boycott them collectively.
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, factories will be warned about environmental protection and
people
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will get a healthy lifestyle.
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, in my opinion,
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information
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contains
business
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secrets and interest in
innovation
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which impacts on
global
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the global
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economy.
The
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business
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secrets often
helps
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to build
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business
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and they may
contributed
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contribute
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to the economy.
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, the
Cokacola
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Coca-Cola
company retains their secrets for years and years which makes them to be renowned.
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, I believe that
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plays an important role
to
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be famous in the technological industries, and cutting edged technologies are breaking all records one after
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. These companies secure the
innovation
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clues highly which made them unique.
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, the tendency to
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information
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helps
people
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to be innovative. In conclusion,
although
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free
information
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makes life easier undoubtedly, I
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strongly
storngly
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strongly
support that hiding
information
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keeps balance in
innovation
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, research,
business
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and
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the economy
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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