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In general people are living longer now. Discuss cases of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.

#people #cases #phenomenon
There is no denying the fact that individuals can live for more years than
by
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gone
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. There are numerous reasons which can be considered to clarify how
this
 trend is going on in the world.
First
 of all, humans experienced a
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 in science which can be named
as
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a major reason
to
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 increase
life
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 expectancy.
People
 have been dying because of contagious diseases in
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 decades. The discovery of viruses
besides
 finding drugs and injections could terminate sicknesses, preventing the start of epidemics in future.
Moreover
, scientists could achieve a way to diagnose the disease before it starts.
For example
, regular blood tests are recommended by doctors these days. Using tests easily
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 the best way for doctors to figure out the reasons why someone’s sickness or to prevent fatal diseases.
On the other hand
, it is obvious that what
people
 eat during their
life
 has a direct impact on their health
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 on the length of their
life
. Medical supplements are produced by medical factories to improve
people
’s health. These kinds of drugs are in access at different ranges of prices to help
people
 have a healthier
life
 and live longer
as a result
. Another issue which has an absolute impact on improving the ability of
people
 to live for more years is using all kinds of nutrients. During the past years,
people
 around the world suffered from a lack of all ranges of nutrients.
This
 phenomenon has been disappearing in most countries around the world. One of the most important reasons
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 decreasing
life
 expectancy has been vanishing lately. To conclude, I believe that longer
life
 expectancy
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 the result of advances in medicine particularly in controlling contagious diseases and
also
 improvement in daily diets.
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  • to illustrate
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