There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have children, Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for couple who decide to do this.

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deciding not to have children's trend is increasing.
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decision is
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lonely
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old age to
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decision. in my opinion
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of
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notion outnumbered its demerits. there are numerous
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this couple's decision
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uptrend continues we will suffer
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the competition we are facing unemployment issues
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and china are
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and these countries are suffering
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unemployment
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rate we see the other side
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cross the age of 40 and they feel loneliness because there is no reason for their life people got bored and hate their lives and
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don't
know the purpose of life
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