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It is argued that express any kind of opinion online by people can affect to other, and a clear example of that could be judgement about governments or companies.

It is argued that
express
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expressing
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 any kind of opinion online by
people
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 can affect
to
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apply
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other
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others
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, and a clear example of that could be
judgement
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a judgement
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 about governments or companies.
This
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 essay agrees that the population must have freedom of expression,
although
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 every idea published should be meditated, due to severe qualifications can
be
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hurt
anyone
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,anyone
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. The most important thing that leads to somebody
write
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writing
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its
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their
his
her
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 opinion online, is
its
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their
his
her
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 own feeling about something, no matter if is positive or negative. Owing to
this
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 expression the critic could be constructive or destructive. When the comment is good, there is no problem,
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,
every one
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 hope to have that kind of observation,
that
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which
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 can improve any situation,
such
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 as
working
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the working
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 environment, state of policy, or any social condition.
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,
is
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if
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 a new president was been elected, and the population
is agree
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agrees
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 with
election
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the election
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 results, all kind of comments
on line
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online
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,
it
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apply
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extend
the
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apply
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good opinions and
give
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gives
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 the new government good energy, the best wishes, and
as a
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result
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 enhance the hope.
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, is relevant to highlight that negative comments
on line
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online
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 could affect directly
to
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apply
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whom receive
it
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them
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, and every online opinion is
worst
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the worst
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 but is public. As the saying goes: good is expressed in public and bad in private. One example had been when
the
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people
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 write negative opinions online about the company where
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work
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, the feelings around
this
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 idea have a damaging trend, and
this
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generate
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 an adverse effect getting worst the work way, and the whole environment. In summary,
the
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apply
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people
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 have to gain awareness about each online publication. Will be better if
the
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apply
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people
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 write with
cold
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a cold
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head
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heads
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, when they feel upset, and do not generate more
tensions
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 in wherever place.

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Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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