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Some people use social media to keep in touch with other people and new events. Do you think advantages of this technology outweigh the disadvantages?

#people #media #touch #events #technology
Whether social
media
 has more advantages or drawbacks has always been a heated discussion.Social applications
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 been popular these years, as with people's dependence on
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smartphones
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smart phones
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smartphones
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,
ipads
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pads
 as well as laptops.Users in no matter
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their ages
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ages
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 use social apps to get in cloth with their friends and family
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members
memebers
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members
.At the same
time
,social
media
such
 as Youtube can always ensure that we keep in touch with the latest news.Some say that technology benefits us ,
others
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suggests
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 that it ruins our normal life more or less. In the upcoming
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 I will discuss both sides and give my own idea. Think about the days without intelligent
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devices
divices
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devices
,people used
telephone
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 to communicate with each other if they got one,which cost a lot of money compared to the internet we
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relay
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 on today. And if we want to get to know what happened today , we can only expect
on
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tomorrow's newspaper and tv news lately.As for now,we can get to know what is
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 now through so many live shows given by government channels or even citizens themselves,everyone can open his own channels to share their opinions and feelings .We can use lots of social
media
 tools to share our happiness and sorrow with family members , friends or even strangers from
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 world. Others may suggest that
,
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the cons
weights
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 more than
pros
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the pros
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 . Social
media
 takes up the majority of our free
time
.We do not spend as much
time
on
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studying and communicating with our loved ones as before.Every now and
then
,it will come up news that teenagers dropped out
from
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 school because of
addicted
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 to online games .The
time
 with online friends ruined
the
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 relationship with real family and pals . A part of internet users may even be cheated by others through
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online
onilne
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online
 chatting. From my perspective,I believe that though social
media
 can bring us some confusion about the way we live and take up too much
time
 that can be spent on
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real-life
relief
realife
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reality
,the benefits and
convinence
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convenience
 it brings have definitely
ensure
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 us to live a
more
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better life.We use less
time
 and money
get
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 to know the world.Consumers spent less on purchasing goods from in and abroad stores.
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Students
Student
Studens
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Students
 are able to learn online at home and chat with their classmates and teachers during the tough
time
 caused by covid-19. All in all, I suggest that social
media
 brings the world more advantages.
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