Some people use social media to keep in touch with other people and new events. Do you think advantages of this technology outweigh the disadvantages?
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media
has more advantages or drawbacks has always been a heated discussion.Social applications has
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smartphones
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smartphones
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their ages
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members
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,social media
such
as Youtube can always ensure that we keep in touch with the latest news.Some say that technology benefits us ,others
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while others
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I will discuss both sides and give my own idea.
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devices
telephone
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happen
now through so many live shows given by government channels or even citizens themselves,everyone can open his own channels to share their opinions and feelings .We can use lots of social Change the form of the verb
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media
tools to share our happiness and sorrow with family members , friends or even strangers from the
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chatting.
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online
media
can bring us some confusion about the way we live and take up too much time
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Students
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are able to learn online at home and chat with their classmates and teachers during the tough Correct your spelling
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time
caused by covid-19. All in all, I suggest that social media
brings the world more advantages.Submitted by 540808011 on
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