Write a letter to the television channel Manager about boring programs during the day time. Tell him about the programs, give suggestions.

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Dear Sir, I write

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letter in reference to the TV programs which run in the morning on your channel "The Dawn". I am a regular viewer, and being a housewife I spare a few hours in the morning to pass my time watching shows while having my morning tea. It is my favourite channel.

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, for the

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few months, the programs and shows on-aired on your channel have become very boring and mainstream. I have to switch to another medium to skip that.

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, I could not hold back from writing a complaint letter to you. I would appreciate it if you could look into

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matter at your earliest convenience. In my opinion, you should choose programs which are appropriate for women.

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, morning shows and cooking shows,

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of cartoons because children are at school at that time. I very much hope that you will be able to solve

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issue. Yours faithfully, Leo

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

159 words

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Write a letter to the television channel Manager about boring programs during the day time. Tell him about the programs, give suggestions.

Freshwater is a limited resource in certain regions of the world. Today, the escalating demand has transformed it into a global problem. What are the causes of increasing demand? What measures can governments and individuals take to respond to the problem?

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