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You are currently doing a diploma course at a college, but you need to take a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In your letter, give details of your course explain why you need a week off say what you want the Principal to do Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am a student of the class Diploma in Marketing who is currently studying in the
second
 semester. I am writing
this
 letter to ask your valuable permission to have a
week
 off in the
first
week
 of
next
 month. My registration number for the course is ST20221345. In the 1st
week
 of
next
 month, we as a family are planning to attend my brother's convocation in Australia.
Hence
 We are planning to visit there to attend his event as a family and spend some time visiting some tourist attractions.
Hence
, I would like to have your permission to attend
this
 family trip.
Also
Add a comma
,Also
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 I am expecting to have your permission to reschedule the assignment submission dates.
Moreover
, I would like to request you not consider
this
 absence for the calculation of mandatory minimum attendance. Once returned, I will look after the missed classes by myself and submit any due assignments within a
week
. I hope you would consider
this
 request favourably. Yours faithfully, Alex
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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