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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#people #health #future
It has been argued that
people
 in the future will be less healthy than today, but there is no evidence of real studies proof of
this
. In my opinion, I disagree with
this
 idea, today
people
 are more aware to be more healthy and spread out
this
 concept in many different ways, so health value is still the same now as in the past. On the one hand, healthcare awareness is a trend now.
First
 of all, life expectancy is rising most men and women are having access to go to a gym, yoga
center
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, basketball or football club. So, they are always up to date on how they can spend their free time by doing some activities even with their kids to elaborate their healthy lifestyle.
Moreover
, we can see at hospitals and healthcare clinics show the number of
people
 who comes for check-up tests is increasing, which is a good indication sign. In recent years, more efforts have been made to address environmental problems that are affecting
people
's health. Many industries are becoming cleaner and have more stringent regulations. Notably, renewable energy and electric engines are gradually replacing the wide spread of fossil fuels, which is the main sources of pollution in urban areas. Efforts are
also
 being undertaken to prevent
further
 soil and water pollution as well. These reasons make me believe that environmental pollution can be a real limit. Over the
last
 century, life expectancy has risen all over the world.
This
 is mainly a result of medical advances and increased access to medicine and vaccinations, which have outweighed all of the negative effects. To conclude, it is not a given that future generations will be healthier.
However
, all the awareness activities and efforts
that
is
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 done by governments and
people
 to reduce global environmental problems,
poor
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 nutrition all give us hope that a better outcome for our children is within reach.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • 1. Standard of health
  • 2. Average
  • 3. Lower
  • 4. Future
  • 5. Aging population
  • 6. Chronic diseases
  • 7. Sedentary lifestyle
  • 8. Lack of exercise
  • 9. Poor dietary habits
  • 10. Environmental pollution
  • 11. Technological advancements
  • 12. Impact on health
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