In today's world, private companies rather than government pay for and conduct most scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Nowadays, private

companies

companies

have been carrying out and investing more capital in scientific

researchs

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research

researches

than

government

organizations.

While

I accept that private funding for

researchs

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research

may have some disadvantages, I strongly believe that its advantages are significantly greater. There are some drawbacks of private

companies

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companies'

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payment for

researchs

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research

that we can clearly see.

Firstly

,

fundings

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from

government

organizations is

extremely

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more abundant than

private

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from private

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companies

. If the projects are approved, scientists will certainly receive

a huge and regular amounts

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huge and regular amounts

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of money throughout the period

time

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of time

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in the

government

commitment.

For instance

, a lot of space missions of NASA were sponsored by The

USA

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government

which

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up to billions of dollars for each project even though the possibility of failure is extremely high.

Secondly

, the funding is easily interrupted which is almost never

interrepted

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interrupted

intercepted

while

in the

government

committen

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committed

. When the

projects

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is funded by

government

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, it will almost be fully implemented no matter how the effection of

research

is.

For example

, in some cases, if

the

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economy

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hardship takes place, the project which is privately

privately

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funded could be stopped because of the difficulties in business and the lack of cash flow of

company

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the company

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.

Incontrast

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, the project

which fund

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by

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the goverment

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goverment

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government

can still be on the way because the

government

has the power

in printing

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cash. In spite of the drawbacks mentioned above,

i

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strongly believe that the benefits of private

companies

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companies'

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payment for scientific

research

outhweigh

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outweigh

the drawbacks.

Firstly

, the procedures to get funding commitment and disbursement

time

of private organizations is much faster than

government

.

It

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leads to

effects

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the effects

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of the studies coming more quickly. Take the

covid-19

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COVID-19

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vaccine as an example. When

the

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humanity was facing a global pandemic and urgently

needs

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a vaccine, some private pharmaceutical

companies

such

as AstraZeneca, Pfizer, Moderna,…

developted

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developed

develop

a vaccine and

save

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people.

Secondly

, private

research

when compared to capital expenditure is often more

cost

-effective than

government

. Because scientists are under

a

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huge pressure from private sponsors including

time

,

cost

and the

expect

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of outstanding

result

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results

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.

More over

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, the private

companies

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companies'

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capital cannot

compared

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to

government

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the government

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, so the pressure to complete at a lower

cost

is certain.

For instance

, when Elon Musk, the

world

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richest person, came to Russia and asked the Russian

government

for their rocket propulsion. He received a non-cooperation and an extremely prohibitive

cost

.

For

this

reason, he and his colleagues at Space-X corporation developed their own rocket engines and tripled the

cost

of launching rockets into space. At the same

time

develop the ability to reuse rockets and. In conclusion,

while

private

companies

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payment and conduction for scientific

research

may have some disadvantages when compared to

government

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the government

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,

i

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believe that they are outweighed by the more significant positive aspects.