Recently you saw an article in a a newspaper about a city/town you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor regarding this. In this letter, you should tell: * How you know about this city/town * What information was incorrect * What the editor should do about this Write at least 150 words.

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I am writing

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letter to inform you about a piece that was published in the newspaper yesterday.

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article was written about a town, Nurata, where I lived for a long time.

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, I know the culture and history of

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city very well.

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, while I read your article, I saw that there were some mistakes.

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of all, one of the mistakes is that the museums in

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city were built by Islom Samanov.

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, it is not a true statement, because I know

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place many times and it was the museum of another person.

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, information about the area is incorrect in it.

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I should admit that you need to publish

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article again. And, I hope you do not any mistakes your newspaper in the

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time. Yours faithfully. Mohini Shodmonova.

uluga2002Wed Nov 16 2022

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

138 words

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The Greeting

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