You have joined a sports club recently. You are having some problems. Write to the manager and include this information. 1) Explain why you joined this club 2) Tell your problems 3) Give solutions

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you in order to give my feedback about the facilities that made me feel uncomfortable at the centre that you manage and my suggestions to fix them. Recently, I joined the Spartak gym club, due to the fact that I want to stay healthy and active. As a person, who trains constantly and tried many sorts of sports activities, I prefer to take cardio and fitness classes. I must confess that the receptionist was very polite and gave me a grand tour of the building. My trainer is very professional, and we follow a plan that was designed by her. I visit classes on Tuesday, and Thursday from 07.30 p.m. to 08.30 p.m. and on Saturday at 09.00 p.m. respectively. Unfortunately recently I've noticed that the cleaning has become very low and I sence a smell coming from a particular part where stairs are located. As you know the space in the centre is quite small and on Saturdays you get a huge number of customers coming. As a ,result many people create congestion in the place, which creates an unbearable environment to train. I would like to suggest a few solutions to the problems.

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, the number of housekeepers should be increased and more control must be taken over their shifts.

Secondly

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, you can limit the number of members who train at the same time.

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, it will resolve the traffic issue. I hope my feedback will make a positive difference in the future. Thanks in advance for your attention and feel free to contact me if you have any questions. Kind regards, Laman Ahmadova

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

272 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

- Facilities: amenities or spaces provided for certain activities.
- Equipment: Tools or items used to perform specific tasks or sports.
- Maintenance: The upkeep or repair of facilities and equipment.
- Uncooperative: Not willing to work or assist others.
- Untrained: Lacking necessary training or skills.
- Feedback: Comments or suggestions for improvement.
- Accommodate: Make or have space for; to meet the needs of.
- Professionalism: The competence or skill expected of a professional.
- Recommend: To suggest a course of action.
- Wellness: The state of being in good health.

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You have joined a sports club recently. You are having some problems. Write to the manager and include this information. 1) Explain why you joined this club 2) Tell your problems 3) Give solutions

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Education is not a luxury but a basic human righ and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree?

How can the government make sure that people save enough money to live on when they are old?

Some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems such as railways and trams. To what extent do you agree or disagee?

Some people ay that all people should stay in full-time education until they are at least 18 years old . To what exten do you agree or disagree?

chools have the social responsibility to discourage children from eating junk food. Others think it is the parent's responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.