Write about the following topic. Some people argue that fashion items cost too much money. Others say that this is acceptable because fashion is an important part of life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There are many organisations which are an important part of our society. They have their own requirements and values that are slightly different from others. One of them is an argument that which is more essential – good appearance or excellent

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of

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? Some organizations consider that outfits should be worn smartly by their

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, especially, workers who communicate with other people representing their company. Because appearance is often the

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thing people notice when they meet. “Outfit can say about us.”

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, if

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dress well, it can increase their effectiveness. Some researches prove that dressing smartly and professionally at

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helps workers to aggrandize their accomplishment more than usual.

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, there are other organizations which prefer to assess the

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of

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of their

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. They think that no matter what you wear, it is enough to complete your task successfully. Because any organization's success depends on its workers’ accomplishments. The more effectively their

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work

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, the more successful the organization become.

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, it is an opportunity to get their salary increased and be valued by their employers. Personally, I think that the

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of an employee’s performance is more significant than dressing in a smart way.

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workers can dress smartly, if they cannot accomplish their

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with high

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, they are still invaluable to the company.

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, superior accomplishment makes them precious more than their outfit. To conclude, even though some organizations argue that dressing in a smart outfit is more significant, I agree with others who think that the

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of an employee’s

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should be assessed above appearance. Excellent

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quality

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is key to a successful organization.