Teachers should be paid according to how much their students learn. What is your opinion?

It is an undeniable fact that " mentors play an instrumental role in making

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future bright ".

However

, some people opine that the salary of

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should depend on how much their learners learn . In

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requisition, I will discuss both views from multiple angles before deriving a meaningful conclusion along with my personal opinion. To commence with, there are myriad reasons

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why teachers must be paid according to what their

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learn . The most pertinent one is that it will

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more concentration among

tutors

. To explicate,

tutors

teach with more focus and dedication when their

wages

depend on their

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outcome

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.

For instance

, mentors use various slides and smart classes to make

scholars

understand the concept clearly . Resultantly , it enhances

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the

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knowledge of

scholars

and proportionately increases the salary of

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. On the paradoxical side, there are various demerits of following their trend . The most prominent one which can be affixed in

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regard is that it plummets the I'll power of teachers. To

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, when

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their full strength to teach the learners and see no changes in the response of

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. It hurts their feelings and they get frustrated . Ergo , after applying their full power

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scholars

, they

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dejected when they get low

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due to

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performances of their

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.

Last

but not the least , the teachers

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focus more on intelligent learners . To be more specific,

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every student in a class is different and needs different attention .

Moreover

, deciding

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with respect to children's

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will lead to

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of weak students as

tutors

will focus on brilliant students .

Consequently

, it ultimately affects the

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carrier

of children. To recapitulate, after sifting through both views thoroughly it can be stated that deciding

wages

with respect to

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outcome

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is good

however

the cons of it cannot be overlooked. In my perspective , every learner must be treated equally and

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must be given on the basis o hard work and

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of

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a mentor

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.