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Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence , while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways . What is your opinion ?

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 to my mind and I believe is that
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 , having a high IQ is something they inherit from their parent.
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 , it is possible to
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intelligence
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 by special computer tests designed
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 experts in
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 the degree of talent , it is quality can be developed to some extent .
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measures how the brain works . Yet another compelling argument
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 can be measured by
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 . is that some
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because of the wealth and status that their family has given them . They have been able to achieve
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, ordinary
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 with a lot of money hire smart
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 to use their
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 for more productivity . To sum up , considering the points discussed
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 the most rational conclusion to be drawn is that there are tools and methods to
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 IQ and human talent .
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 to determine the level of
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 of
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