during a recent palne journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurent .You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurents. Write a letter to this businessman . In your letter Remind him when and where you met tell him what kind of job you are intrested in say why you think you would be suitable for the job

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Dear Mr Jones I am Tim May , I am writing

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potential job opening in one of your restaurant chain restaurants. If, you remember we met on a flight from Sydney to Brisbane and you sat

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To me . You told me that you are looking for an F&B manager for one of the restaurants situated in Brisbane downtown. As in our ,

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I already told you that I am currently working in

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restaurant in Sydney . which is one of the best restaurants in Sydney. As I am fully responsible for F&B operations in Macy. I can handle an entire segment of food and beverage operations . I am well versed in the entire operations of different cuisine preparation be it Thai, Indian , Arabic , Mexican or American . ,

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beverage section has a vast collection of different blends of alcoholic and fruit juices at Macy . if selected I can join by June 2021 . Looking forward to hearing from you soon . Yours Sincerely, Tim May

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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8 paragraphs

176 words

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