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A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called 'The book that influenced me most’. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter, describe what this book was about explain how this book influenced you say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Sir or Madam,
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 week I read a column regarding contributions to your article 'The
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 that influenced me most'. I am writing
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 letter to add my experience with the
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 name 'The Dhoni Touch' which influenced me the most. In terms of content, the
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 was about the life story of the legendary cricketer MS Dhoni. It covered the journey from a school cricket team player to becoming the captain of the national team.
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, the
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 presents the right way of thinking which helps to make tough decisions in life. The
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 influenced me in several ways. I learned how important it is to be calm and keep my mind stable in pressure situations. It taught me the required leadership qualities which are helping me to be a good team leader at work. If people read
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 once only, they would likely be encouraged. people can learn many skills from
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such
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 as critical thinking, decision making and good leadership qualities.
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, Dhoni's personality set an example for people to be humble and grounded even after achieving milestones in life. I am looking forward to seeing my contribution to your article. Yours faithfully, Keval Patel.

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task achievement
To improve task achievement, ensure that the description of the book is detailed and vividly reflects its contents and impact. While the influence on the writer is noted, more specific examples or narratives illustrating this influence would enhance the response.
coherence and cohesion
To enhance coherence and cohesion, use a wider range of cohesive devices and topic-specific vocabulary. Ensure paragraphs flow logically from one to another with clear topic sentences and fully developed ideas.
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