Today more and more tourists are visiting where condition are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefit and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places

Nowadays all
people
like to go out for their vacations with their families and friend. They visit many places for a holiday. There has been an increase in tourists every year. More than lakhs of
people
are going on vacation. As the questions say they are visiting where
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is difficult
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there and sand dunes will come and something will happen with them , they always carry their guide with them so that they can explore it properly. The benefits are
people
can explore the new world and can enjoy with their families as many of
people
are travelling some amount of profits are given that country so that there is an equality between them. The disadvantages are that some
people
think that wasting money on
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and waste of time they take us to places where we can explore it. If there is some issue it will be very difficult for him to face it. It is not about
people
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visiting
visting
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visiting
or travelling, but sometimes
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situtation
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oneshould
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one should
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with the help of
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or a person who stays there because he is the right one to know
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going to happen and when it will happen and helps a lot to
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one's life .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unspoiled nature
  • breathtaking landscapes
  • diverse wildlife
  • sense of adventure
  • self-reliance
  • resilience
  • problem-solving skills
  • personal challenge
  • transformative experience
  • cultural awareness
  • environmental awareness
  • fragility of ecosystems
  • global diversity
  • environmental degradation
  • sustainable practices
  • specialized gear
  • guides and permits
  • accessibility
  • basic amenities
  • economic benefits
  • local communities
  • job creation
  • demand for local services
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