It has been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in books.” Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important and why?

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Unquestionably, every coin has two sides and so are the
people
. Society's
people
are divided into two groups and
therefore
, Everything is not limited and one can not gain knowledge from books.
Hence
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topic is debated among
people
.
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essay will compare and contrast both views will be discussed
further
with a reliable conclusion. Initiating with the points supporting
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school of thought,
Firstly
, I would like to highlight that in cutting edge competition of growing society education is a mandatory thing one should gain
in
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his age.
Moreover
, getting an education is
first
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step to getting the knowledge of the field of study we want to expertise in,
instead
of focusing on numerous
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we can segregate our final studies
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one particular subject.
For instance
, during school and high
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we are full of many subjects altogether, but once we grade up to the University, we specialize in medicine, engineering and information technology to mention a few. As
this
will emphasize both theory and practical knowledge.
Also
, the Institute grooms
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all-round development of a student, so he or she can
compete
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the corporate pressure.
On the other hand
, It cannot be ruled out that experience is
also
a key factor required to beat the competition out there in the industry. A
further
aspect, is what we have grasped
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concept, in theory, can be implemented in practice.
Additionally
, as we keep on practising and doing practical things
this
grows our skill, and ability to tackle the obstruction
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come
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into our work. Take
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, Until unless a doctor will not practise the skill of doing
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how can be he a good surgeon in future
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In conclusion, All the above-mentioned views provide enough support for the notion.
Although
, it is
also
the mindsets of
people
what they believe and what they favour .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • comprehensive
  • structured
  • well-researched
  • theoretical foundation
  • practical application
  • surface-level
  • firsthand
  • synergy
  • practical skills
  • field of study
  • learning styles
  • career path
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