There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home. This is because the computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative development ?

Because of the reasonable price and easy access

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digital technology

such

as

computer

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computers

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nowadays, teleworking is increasingly favoured by both workers and students. From my point of view,

although

there are some detrimental effects of long-distance working, they are totally outweighed by its positive effects. It cannot be denied that

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computer

technology has some drawbacks that should be taken into consideration. Spending too much

time

in front of

computer

monitors may lead to a secondary lifestyle.

In other words

, people use most of the

time

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a day

to

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work

or

study

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with their computers and

therefore

rarely have quality

time

for other outdoor activities

such

as playing sports or going to picnics.

Furthermore

, if people use computers to

work

and

study

for an extended period of

time

, they are likely to get eye diseases

such

as eye strain or short-sightedness. A review of 38 studies in Vietnam reported that 20 per cent of the subjects experienced short-sightedness.

However

, the benefits that are brought to human beings by

computer

technology can surpass its drawbacks. One of the advantages of using computers for

work

and

study

is that businesses and schools can reduce

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office operating

cost

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and other general costs

such

as electricity, air-conditioning and other utilities.

Thus

, they will save a significant amount of expenditure and have more money to invest in their products or facilities. As for employees and students who

work

and

study

at home, they will avoid the risk of meeting problems related to

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, train or bus delays,

for example

, or

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bad weather.

Besides

, remote- working offers students or workers more

time

to spend with families or

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outdoor activities as they don’t have to drive or take a bus to their workplaces or schools. In conclusion, I still believe that the benefits of teleworking are totally more significant than its drawbacks even though it has both pros and cons.