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Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #waste #time #school #students #study #literature #novels #poems
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Most high schools force
students
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 to
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learn
 novels and poetry for
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fluency
. These textbooks not only improve
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' speaking and writing skills
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 but
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 help any student to develop proper personal
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valid
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values
. I think that textbooks like
literature
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 should be taught to school
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, reading
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 has never been useless for high school
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. Because the worldview of a child who reads books expands.
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,
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fluency in many textbooks will benefit the rest of
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. Because reading poems or works of art definitely
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exercises
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 the skills of critical thinking and drawing conclusions.
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, reciting poems increases
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' desire to organize the
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 of other languages, and
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 is one of the tools to become a professor in the
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. Nowadays, reading and studying
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 plays an important role.
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, a person who learns these things will definitely help
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to become a scientist or a lawyer in the
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, studying
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 encourages
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 to become educated citizens and certainly helps
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 become well-rounded individuals in life. By reading
literature
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,
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 often broaden their horizons and become wiser.
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, many literary works are valuable to people. because
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 are often able to direct their own personalities and abilities. All scientists are passionate about organizing
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. because they better understand the past history of mankind.
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, they can predict the
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 of human society and contribute to the societies around them. In conclusion, poetry and
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expands
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 the student's
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worldview
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, schoolchildren should be encouraged to learn poems and novels.
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 it will definitely show good results in the
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