You recently broke your leg and your colleagues from work sent you get well cards and presents. Write a letter to them and say •Thanks them for supporting you. •Describe how you spend your time. •Explain about your recovery process.

Dear Teammates, I am writing
this
letter to thank you for sending me get-well cards and presents. These gesture of love means a lot to me. I want to thank all of you that you are here during my leg injury to support me.
This
difficult time becoming easy because of your good wishes. I spend my time watching the news
as well as
I check my emails on a daily basis and I am trying to complete my all pending tasks.
Moreover
, I spend my time with my family as much as possible because I am not able to walk outside.
Thus
, I am doing all of these activities to not feel bored. My orthopaedic doctor told me that at least for one month I am not allowed to drive my car.
Additionally
, he
also
suggested I walk in my house with the support of a walker and I do my exercise for a speedy recovery. Hope you all are doing well in the office. I miss all of you very badly. Yours Lovingly, Ziva Shah.
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coherence cohesion
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Consider grouping similar ideas into single paragraphs to make the structure more organized.
task achievement
Make sure to expand on how the presents and cards positively impacted your emotional well-being to fully achieve the task.
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The letter is polite and appropriately thanks the colleagues, which is well-suited to the task.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is warm and friendly, fitting for a letter to colleagues.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • get well soon
  • heartfelt thanks
  • overwhelmed by your kindness
  • lift my spirits
  • thoughtful gesture
  • convalescence
  • immobilized
  • keeping my mind occupied
  • binge-watching
  • immersing myself in books
  • following doctor’s orders
  • physical therapy
  • on the road to recovery
  • making progress
  • optimistic about
  • mentally prepared for
  • tremendous support
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