Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taugh to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A significant number of people are of the opinion that creating a competitive environment among

children

should be encouraged, whereas

others

are of the belief that

children

who are brought up in a

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environment become more useful adults.

This

essay will discuss both views and my own viewpoint will be shared.

Firstly

, citizens who opine that competition in youngsters

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should

shoud

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should

be encouraged are not far from

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because

this

brings about innovation and creativity. People, especially students, who are taught to engage in healthy

competitions

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might become more successful in school, in that, they will always try to bring out the best in

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in order to be outstanding students.

However

, if these contestions grow sour, negative things may erupt.

For example

, if

children

tend to compete with each other with the aim of becoming superior and regarding

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others

as inferior, these

children

may grow to become less friendly and more narcissistic and histrionic in the future.

Nonetheless

, teaching young adults how to

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with each other has its own benefits and drawbacks.

That is

, these people learn to be

team-players

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, become more

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and mostly have a good

relationship

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with

others

.

Conversely

, they might not become good

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making healthy choices in life,

therefore

, might become dependent on

others

to make decisions.

For instance

, when there are no conflicts arising

as a result

of a competition-free environment, the

children

might not learn any problem-solving skills and

this

might, in the long

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affect them as adults. In conclusion, I believe that both situations have

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own advantages and disadvantages,

hence

, parents, teachers and society should do well to inculcate into them good morals so that both skills will be acquired.