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Some people say that young people learn useful skills by playing electronic and computer games. Others say that young people who play electronic and computer games are wasting their time.both these views and give your own opinion.

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In today's world where we all have access to the internet, more and more
children
 are playing
computer
games
 and their popularity is increasing all the time.
This
 essay will look at the positive aspects these
games
 can have and
also
 the negative effects on
children
.
Firstly
, as education is becoming more demanding for many young people,
computer
games
 can provide a way of relaxing and reducing stress.
Computer
games
 can take us into different worlds where we can escape from reality.
In addition
 to
this
,
computer
games
 today are very advanced and can help
children
 develop their thinking skills. Instructions need to be understood and
games
 often include complicated problems which need to be solved.
However
, there are
also
 many problems with the increasing popularity of
computer
games
. Many
children
 become addicted to them and they play for hours, sometimes through the night. In South Korea, the government has banned
children
 from playing
games
 after midnight as the problem was so great and the effect on education was very negative.
Furthermore
, some
children
 find it difficult to identify what is real and what is virtual. Some people argue that
this
 has led to a rise in crime inspired by video
games
.
This
 is not proven, but it is undeniable that
games
 today can be very violent. To sum up, there are both advantages and disadvantages
with
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computer
games
 and it seems that parents need to exercise caution and monitor their
children
's activity as some
games
 may be more suitable than others. Task 2 sample 3
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