Some people think young people should be required to have full-time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Studying
Study
is Add an article
The study
the
vital part Correct article usage
a
for
Change preposition
of
the
better future for any individual. It is suggested by some folks that adolescents should take part Correct article usage
a
distictively
in the Correct your spelling
distinctively
studies
till the age of 18 years. Considering the fact that studies
certainly are not necessarily required for ones
who want to excel in careers like arts or sports etc., Correct pronoun usage
those
thus
I disagree with the argument and will explain in detail as perused further
.
Firstly
, students should have different interest
or Fix the agreement mistake
interests
talent
other Fix the agreement mistake
talents
then
Replace the word
than
studies
, hence
by complling
them for Correct your spelling
compiling
compelling
studies
will be waste of time and efforts
for them, Fix the agreement mistake
effort
for instance
, one of my friends was interested in cricket
from his childhood days and he was a
excellent batsman, Change the article
an
thus
he prefered
to take Correct your spelling
referred
drop
from school for Add an article
a drop
the drop
cricket
coaching. Currently, he is playing cricket
at the state level and enjoying his passion. Secondly
, in the contemporary era, everyone including parents are
aware Change the verb form
is
about
Change the preposition
of
advantages
of Correct article usage
the advantages
studies
which is evident from the recent survey conducted by one of the prominent agencies that Correct article usage
the numbers
numbers
of school dropouts are declining.
Fix the agreement mistake
number
On the contrary
, people who favours
mandatory schools till adulthood Change the verb form
favour
believes
that after adulthood they will anyway face other responsibilities including Correct subject-verb agreement
believe
earn
Change the verb form
earning
their
living, so Change the word
a
youngerones
should devote their time to Correct your spelling
younger ones
studies
Correct your spelling
up to
upto
certain age before they Correct your spelling
up to
inducted
into professional life. Add a missing verb
are inducted
However
, this
is only applicable for
students who want to excel in Change preposition
to
studies
and not other Correct pronoun usage
their studies
youngerones
who chose Correct your spelling
younger ones
non-educational
Correct article usage
the non-educational
field
. Fix the agreement mistake
fields
For example
, the legendary cricketer Sachin Tendulker
was Correct your spelling
Tendulkar
school
dropout and played Add an article
a school
cricket
from age of 14. Hence
, compulsory education will deter their progress.
In conclusion, the
young people should Correct article usage
apply
able
to decide their career path in consultation with their parents and they should not Add a missing verb
be able
comple
to do full-time Correct your spelling
complete
studies
until and unless it is allowed by their future plan
.Fix the agreement mistake
plans
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