Some people think young people should be required to have full-time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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is

the

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vital part

for

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better future for any individual. It is suggested by some folks that adolescents should take part

distictively

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distinctively

in the

studies

till the age of 18 years. Considering the fact that

studies

certainly are not necessarily required for

ones

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those

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who want to excel in careers like arts or sports etc.,

thus

I disagree with the argument and will explain in detail as perused

further

.

Firstly

, students should have different

interest

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or

talent

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talents

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other

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studies

,

hence

by

complling

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compiling

compelling

them for

studies

will be waste of time and

efforts

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for them,

for instance

, one of my friends was interested in

cricket

from his childhood days and he was

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excellent batsman,

thus

he

prefered

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referred

to take

drop

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from school for

cricket

coaching. Currently, he is playing

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at the state level and enjoying his passion.

Secondly

, in the contemporary era, everyone including parents

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aware

about

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advantages

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the advantages

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of

studies

which is evident from the recent survey conducted by one of the prominent agencies that

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the numbers

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numbers

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of school dropouts are declining.

On the contrary

, people who

favours

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favour

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mandatory schools till adulthood

believes

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that after adulthood they will anyway face other responsibilities including

earn

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their

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living, so

youngerones

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younger ones

should devote their time to

studies

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up to

upto

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up to

certain age before they

inducted

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are inducted

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into professional life.

However

,

this

is only applicable

for

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students who want to excel in

studies

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their studies

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and not other

youngerones

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younger ones

who chose

non-educational

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field

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.

For example

, the legendary cricketer Sachin

Tendulker

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Tendulkar

was

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a school

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dropout and played

cricket

from age of 14.

Hence

, compulsory education will deter their progress. In conclusion,

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young people should

able

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be able

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to decide their career path in consultation with their parents and they should not

comple

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complete

to do full-time

studies

until and unless it is allowed by their future

plan

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.