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It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best for both individual and society. Do you agree or disagree? give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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When
people
 are getting closer to their 30s, the societal
pressure
 of being in a relationship and getting kids is increasing immensely.
This
 is because a lot of
people
 are at a stage in their lives in which they just want to settle and build a family. For me, it
is disagreed
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 that
people
 should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, out of individual and societal reasons. Analysing the mental health issues and the nonsense of
this
pressure
,
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 will prove
this
.
Firstly
, there are
people
 in
this
 society that does not necessarily want to build a family. The
pressure
that is
 put on them by folks that want to get married and settled is giant.
This
 can
for example
 lead to a more unhappy life for the
people
 that are always being asked
,
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 when they will
finally
 get married.
That is
 one reason to not add even more
pressure
 by encouraging
people
 to get married before 30.
Secondly
, it is just not necessary to get married.
People
 in relationships can
also
 just be in a relationship without having a wedding to prepare
.
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 In conclusion,
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