Some educators believe that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Although

some individuals think it is beneficial to disclose as much knowledge as you can in the fields of business, academia, and scientific study others believe that

this

type of

information

is too significant to be shared openly. I am inclined to believe that it is detrimental to reveal all

information

.

To begin

with, knowledge which is published to society can cause concern in the public.

In other words

, some industry

information

must remain confidential.

For instance

, in 2018, archaeologists started to excavate a cave where in Mersin. After a while, some archaeologists leaked the

information

that there was a strong energy in there. Because peasants did not understand

this

means, they produced a theory.

Thus

the people who lived around the cave moved from the cave to a remote location because they are afraid of energy.

Secondly

, if all

information

is made public , they can start interfering in government affairs.

This

means that people who do have not knowledge enough can offer their thought.

Therefore

, there could be problems in the country.

For example

, some hackers hacked Wikileaks.

Then

this

data has created great interest in society. Everyone said different ideas about the state, and

then

there was a mix-up. To conclude, whether sharing as much

information

as possible is advantageous or not is a controversial issue all over the world.

However

, because it can cause concern in the public and it could cause internal confusion, all

information

about certain issues must not be explained.

Furthermore

, it is predictable that the number of stored

information

will increase over time.