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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today

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The advent of modern technology has changed our lives dramatically. It is undeniable that advancements in Automotives have increased the popularity of
cars
 among
people
. As far as I am concerned, I disagree with the statement that in the
next
 couple of decades the popularity and usage of
cars
 will decrease. I will explain certain compelling reasons for
this
 point in the following essay.
Firstly
, in the past,
cars
 were the main source of pollution, but now Electric
cars
, hybrids and hydrogen fuel cell
cars
 are in the market, and they contribute less than 5% of environmental pollution. Tesla
cars
 are famous in the western world nowadays, and they are gaining popularity in Asian countries as well because they are automatic, good for the environment and electrically charged.
In addition
, they are less expensive than other
cars
. So,
people
 will buy more electric
cars
 in future.
Secondly
, Nowadays, life is busy, and everyone wants to save
time
 and energy, so to avoid travelling by public transport or carpooling
people
 are more inclined towards purchasing their own
car
. It saves most of the
time
.
Moreover
, owning a
car
 can make a person independent because in late hours at night
people
 cannot find
car
 services like Uber or Lyft and in the case of an emergency a
car
 is needed ,
for instance
, I remember my mother got food poisoning and she was vomiting and her stomach was excruciating, I had my own
car
, so I took her to an emergency, and she got treatment in no
time
 because of the
car
 it took me few minutes to take her to the hospital. In conclusion, vehicles are designed to help
people
 and provide them comfort while they are travelling.
Vehicle
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Vehicles
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not only
save
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saves
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 us from the inconvenience of public transport
,
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apply
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 but
also
 save a huge amount of
time
.
Furthermore
, new designs and more features in
cars
 make them to be less hazardous for the environment and human life.
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