Being celebrity -such as a famous film star or sports personality- brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being celebrity brings more benefits or problems

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In today's world, being a super start
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as a blogger or a movie actor brings not only demerits but
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merits. In my point of view, being a famous person has more pros rather than cons.
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essay will examine both benefits and drawbacks of being a well-known person in the modern world.
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and foremost, one drawback of being famous is that celebrities are always forced to be guarded by security guards or hide their faces in public.
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, they are not able to live their routine life without attention from passers-by including taking photos with strangers, answering
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weird questions, and inadequate actions from pedestrians. To give an illustration, when celebrities go to a cafe near
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their house,
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thing that they might see is that photographs are waiting for them to take some photos for their newspaper or blog. After that, personalities cannot buy coffee in the cafe, sit at the table, drink a cup of coffee,
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spend time with themself since people around them are usually trying to disturb them.
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, the benefit of super star's life is that celebrities are well-known all around the world
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to the support from the government, businesses, pedestrians, and others.
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, there is a multitude of opportunities to build a career as well as start a business or establish a shelter.
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, there is a possibility to help destitute persons who are struggling with poverty.
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, when a well-known individual starts a startup or builds a shelter and tells that others are able to invest some money there,
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others usually follow famous people and give their money to sponsor the shelter or the business. To sum up, being an actor or a blogger with millions of subscribers has a number of advantages. Namely, needy people could be supported by actors and businesses could be started faster and easier.
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, constant attention from passers-by is a
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disadvantages
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of being a famous human.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Scrutiny
  • Public Image
  • Mental Health Issues
  • Psychological Pressure
  • Financial Wealth
  • Luxurious Lifestyle
  • Public Opinion
  • Social Issues
  • Media Attention
  • Endorsements
  • Job Security
  • Career Longevity
  • Public Expectations
  • Societal Values
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