You are having problems with a neighbour’s animals because the fence between your properties is old and In poor repair. You want the neighbour to pay half the cost of building a new fence. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter say what the problems are explain how a new fence will solve the problems suggest that the neighbour pays half of the cost

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Dear sir, I am writing

this

letter to let you know that your dog is

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trying

entrying

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entering

in our garden and is playing with our plants, which

cause

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causes

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apply

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damage

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the

threes

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trees

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. The reason why is easy to

entry

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enter

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in our garden is

because

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that

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the

fence

between the properties is old and it has a hold. I would like to propose that we can buy a new

fence

, so it will stop

that

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apply

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the dog

pass

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into

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our garden and

also

it will help

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our houses to look

beautifull

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beautiful

. I did a quotation and the cost for a new

fence

is $500

dolares

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dollars

and it

include

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the

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installation

instalation

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installation

Thus

, we can pay half and half as the

fence

goes between our

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houses

horses

hourses

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hours

. Please let me know if it

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sounds

souds

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sounds

for you so we can buy the new

fence

as soon as possible. Thank you for giving your

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attention

atention

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attention

this

matter Kind Regards Juliana

Submitted by julibm30 on Fri Nov 18 2022

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
23Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

155 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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