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These days Internet –based courses have become a popular alternative to University – based courses. Some students prefer this type of learning because they do not need to attend lectures. Others argue that it is important to study at university. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

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 Harris, My name is Kirill,
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 am
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 grandson of your old friend. I am a student and live in Moscow right now. I have decided recently to spend my vacation in Italy, Rome. My plane will arrive at 6 pm at the local airport. I get on the bus to the city
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 and
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 get a taxi. I really would like to see all of
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 incredible architecture like the coliseum, try local cuisine like pasta or pizza, and different types of
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 vine and other beverages. I have noticed that you live close to the
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 and can accommodate me in your flat. It is really nice, I appreciate it and
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 Invite you for an outing with me. You would tell me the story that you go through with my grandfather. I am sure you have a lot of things you could tell
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 about Rome. What do you think about my suggestion? Hope you get in! See you soon. With
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best wishes, Kirill.
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