You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practise in the community hall. You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall. Write a letter to the manager. In the letter: • describe what the group does • explain why the group is good for the community • suggest alternative days and times for practice You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir or Madam, I'm a member group of Thai musicians that would like to join in
this
public hall in the evenings on Tuesday and Friday per week
for
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practise
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our music. We have been playing the music for a long time since the 2
lasts
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year
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, we have produced and created a new
song
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with various styles, surely, that would be making many people feel enjoyable and satisfied with the beautiful melody signatures on every song we did. Our band has merely something required, we what to practise in the social hall every two days per week, starting
next
Sunday and has specifics times are around 06:00 pm - 07:00 pm, approximately. If you allow with our requirments, we promise that there are not any dull or disapointment because we will playing as best as possible that we can. We hope to meet
this
community so much, we want to be colours on the event. Sincerely yours, DD
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