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Nowadays more and more children are being bought up in single parent families. What are the causes of this? What effects can be seen as a result of this?

#children #parent #families #effects
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parent
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • single-parent families
  • divorce rates
  • societal norms
  • economic independence
  • teen pregnancies
  • unplanned pregnancies
  • financial challenges
  • emotional and psychological effects
  • social development
  • behavioral problems
  • academic achievement
  • increased responsibilities
  • resilient
  • supportive environment
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