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Nowadays more and more children are being bought up in single parent families. What are the causes of this? What effects can be seen as a result of this?

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Introduction
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society
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parent
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 of one problem which
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affect
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effect
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children
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,where single
parent
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rease
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raise
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children
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 serious issue when single
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raise
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 partner to help due to one divorce or death.
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are
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 resulted that most
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lack
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children
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parent
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 of respect.
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secondly
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,for instance in the
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 of education standard
children
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dont
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don't
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parent
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parents
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education
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 level ,
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 have to work and still take good care of the
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,it is a very critical matter in the
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.
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thirdly
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children
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 with single
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parent
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lack
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 home training
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always
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always
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children
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 who have been
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released
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raised
with
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parent
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parents
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 mostly drop out of school.
Conclusion
in conclusion
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children
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raised
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single
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a single
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parent
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parents
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 of knowledge and
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in
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inability
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ability
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the ability
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communiction
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communication

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • single-parent families
  • divorce rates
  • societal norms
  • economic independence
  • teen pregnancies
  • unplanned pregnancies
  • financial challenges
  • emotional and psychological effects
  • social development
  • behavioral problems
  • academic achievement
  • increased responsibilities
  • resilient
  • supportive environment
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