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Today, more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantage for tourists who visit such places. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Generally, most people did not like to travel to hard places,
such
 as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. Popular tourist areas are usually chosen because travelling from one country to another is more manageable.
However
, times have changed as some travellers are very interested in exploring places like the moon and space to learn about the experiment and for their enjoyment, despite the additional effort required. A typical tourist destination may become boring for them, especially for those who love challenging work.
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 to these areas, not only allow others to learn from the photographs and recordings
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 but
also
 share their experiences.
This
 is why it's wonderful for gaining knowledge and providing advantages for the rest of us who can’t physically visit there yet but can see
such
 lovely places.
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In addition
 to the many potential benefits, some disadvantages can happen during the travel. Injuries from sandstorms in the desert or sickness due to harsh weather
that is
 freezing cold or boiling hot are just two examples. It will be difficult for those adventurers to prepare for the trip in advance, and it will be much more challenging for them to stay at that location. There is no one to help them if something happens and it is more costly to go to
such
 areas.
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conclusion, if they'd like to explore those trips, they should visit with others and travel with a group or with others who share the same interest.
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