Some people say that the best of improve road safety is to icrease the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Traffic collision has always been one of the major problems in current times. Some people take the view that the minimum legal
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to get a
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license should be increased to upgrade
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safety.
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essay totally agrees with that statement and will provide arguments to support that opinion.
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of all, driving a
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or riding a motorbike is not
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easy task as it seems to be, it requires driving skills, awareness of traffic instructions, knowledge about
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vehicles
vehicules
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vehicles
or motorcycles' maintenance and most of all a sense of
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responsibility
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responsibility
, and it is well known that
adolescense
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adolescence
is a time of recklessness and foolishness, so a
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tennagers
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teenagers
might not be
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responsible
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most of them would not care about
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instructions nor checking their automobiles before travelling, all
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concern
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them is the thrill of driving a
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and reaching their destination as soon as possible regardless of speed limits.
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type of attitude towards driving will lead to
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accidents and decreases
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safety;
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, adults tend to be more mature and reasonable when it comes to driving, they are aware of the importance of
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matter and they know it should be taken seriously, that's one of the reasons of why the legal
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of getting a driver license should be increased. There is,
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,
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point to make, over the
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few years, an increasing number of
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crashes caused by people under the
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of 20 was reported in the news,opinion of the public was divided but some parts of society tend to have a strong opinion about increasing the legal
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to get a permit to drive. To conclude,
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for driving will be of benefit to
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safety.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • mature
  • responsible
  • accidents
  • emotional maturity
  • road conditions
  • hazards
  • impulsive behavior
  • risk assessment
  • inexperienced drivers
  • driver education
  • road safety measures
  • driver training programs
  • stricter testing
  • economic implications
  • social implications
  • automated driving systems
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