You ordered equipment online. However, when you received, it was damaged. Send a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter, you should tell: giving the details about the equipment explain the damage suggest what you want the manager to do Write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir. I am writing
this
letter to complain to you about the problem with a column of my new laptop which I recently offered to your company.
Last
week, I booked a piece of equipment from an online store . And at that time, it seems to function well. Unfortunately, after 2 days of use, some functions did not work very well.
In addition
that the charge of the laptop is finishing very quickly in the short term.
Therefore
, it caused different inconveniences for me. Because I do my studies with
this
equipment. Despite the fact, I have already connected to your company about the issues a week ago nothing has been done yet. I request an immediate replacement of the laptop and expect a reply from you as soon as possible. Yours faithfully. Lucy.
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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